Your gong fu has a lot of good and bad points, but I'd like to draw particular attention to problems in your footwork.
你的功夫优点和缺点并存,但我希望你能特别要注意你的步法。
I have always regarded the country as something you look at through a train window, or something you occasional visit during the weekend.
总认为乡村是透过火车车窗看到的那个样了,或偶尔周末去游玩一下景象。